You know what I would like?

[lomonaaeren]

For "Another Country" not to turn into a novella, the way it's threatening to do.

(Seriously. 8000 words and a lot of them are details about the Healers' treatment of Harry and Harry's resentment of this and Draco's library-spirit? Seriously? You were supposed to be on your way to establishing the relationship by now, story).

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[lala4889.livejournal.com]

I hear writers talk about their characters as if they have a mind of their own...and so it sounds like stories do too. Maybe this one is compensating for the fact that Harry and Draco moved along more quickly than you'd anticipated in Soldier's Welcome. Or maybe this is your Infinite Game at work. :)

[lomonaaeren.livejournal.com]

Plots certainly do!

I think the pace of their interaction is about right. I suppose I just didn't anticipate so much interaction.