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Thank you again for all the reviews!

This is the end of A Determined Frame of Mind, and, with it, the Frames of Mind series. (I may write a prequel detailing Harry’s time under the Cassandra Curse or Draco’s invention of Psyche-Diving, but those would be gen, and probably wouldn’t be written for some time anyway). I do intend to keep posting other stories after I finish my current WiP, I Give You a Wondrous Mirror. Thanks for reading!

Epilogue

“And it is the verdict of the Wizengamot—“

“I could give him a rotting disease. Just enough to take the fingers of his right hand. That wouldn’t be vengeance for what he did to you, but it would be a start.” Draco’s voice was low and urgent in Harry’s right ear.

“Will you hush?” Harry snapped back at him, making sure to keep his voice low enough that no one would glance at them disapprovingly. Draco might not care about looks like that, but for Harry, the entrance into public life was still too recent for him to be happy about making a fuss. Disapproval of his relationship with Draco didn’t matter. Disapproval of him as a person reminded him too much of what it had been like under the curse. “This isn’t convincing me to give you back your wand, you know.”

Draco made a horrid face. Harry turned away from him, wondering for a moment if the interruption had been enough to make him miss Scrimgeour’s fate. But the Wizengamot member reading from an elaborate scroll had paused, as they always did, to restate Scrimgeour’s crimes, just in case there was someone in the crowd who had managed to miss them.

They were sitting in the courtroom that Harry remembered with such intense unfondness from his trial for using underage magic before his fifth year began. Scrimgeour sat in the chair this time, with the Wizengamot staring down at him from their high places. Harry had to appreciate the symbolism. Until recently, the Minister would have had the right to stare at criminals like that. Now he was less than an insect to most of those involved.

The trial had gone speedily. Harry was wise enough to know that that wasn’t because of Scrimgeour’s particular crimes, but because of his own name. He felt uneasy about it. On the other hand, no amount of speeches trying to convince the Wizengamot to ignore who he was would be effective.

He touched the silver ring on his finger, which bore the Malfoy crest on its simply-cut green stone. Already that had become the calming gesture that touching his bandaged wrists had once been.

Draco’s hands came into view, settling on the balcony railing beside him, and then picking up and rubbing his fingers. Harry smiled. It had taken some digging for him to recover the Potter crest that had appeared on his father’s schoolbooks and his late grandparents’ home, but he had finally found it, and Draco bore that crest on a red stone. His ring was of gold.

Draco had not even protested the colors, which showed how much he approved of Harry’s public declaration of their relationship.

“Almost done,” Draco whispered near his ear. “They won’t dare not sentence him.” He paused, and then added, “Of course, if you would let me have my wand back, then I could make sure his life is even more interesting after this.”

“Not a chance,” Harry retorted. He had taken Draco’s wand away from him the moment he first pointed it at Scrimgeour, or tried to point it at him, under the cover of the crowd. “Now hush. They’re about to give the sentence.”

“—the Wizengamot has decided,” the witch concluded, with a stoic dignity in her voice that she no doubt thought appropriate to the occasion, “that the former Minister Rufus Scrimgeour will be sentenced to Azkaban for life.”

Harry huffed out a breath, and blinked hard. There were no Dementors in Azkaban anymore; the final battles against Voldemort and the hunts afterwards, armed with new spells that the Order of the Phoenix had invented during the war, had dissipated or scattered them completely. But still, spending the rest of his life on a storm-lashed rock was a humbling fall for the man who had once hoped to control the British wizarding world.

And though Scrimgeour was in his seventies, that didn’t mean nearly as much for a wizard as for a Muggle. He might live fifty years or even a century yet if he was unlucky, bound there.

For a moment, Harry was tempted to call out and protest the sentence. But then he turned his head and saw that Scrimgeour wasn’t staring at the witch who had read the sentence, or even at the rest of the Wizengamot, as if to ask how they could have betrayed him like this. He was looking at Harry instead.

The hatred in his eyes was insane.

Harry made himself stare back, but it was hard. Even now, he knew, this man would have liked nothing so much as to see him dead and bleeding, preferably by his own hand. If he was free in any manner, he would continue to make Harry’s life a misery. He seemed to have decided that his one mistake was in allowing the curse to be discovered. There was certainly no sign in his face that he regretted his actions.

Harry felt Draco’s hand on his shoulder. He leaned close to him for strength, not caring if Scrimgeour saw. The Minister’s great weakness, after all, had been that he saw others solely as tools to further or threats to challenge his position. He had no conception of cooperation or the rewards that might come out of it.

Scrimgeour had the opportunity to make a speech at the end. He said nothing. He was simply taken away in chains, and Harry began to breathe a little more easily the moment he was past the courtroom door.

He groaned when he realized that several of the Wizengamot members and a good portion of the crowd were heading towards him. Since the announcement of the Cassandra Curse and Scrimgeour’s fall from grace, the country seemed to be competing to see who could shower him with the most solicitous attention and send him the most extravagant gifts. Draco thought the gifts were hilarious and insisted that Harry keep all of them, if only to resell later, but he was the one who dealt better with the public attention. Harry gratefully let him take over for the moment, while he closed his eyes and fixed Scrimgeour’s stare in his memory.

That was what hatred looked like.

Harry was never going to forget again. He doubted that Scrimgeour would be the last person to hate him like that, as he had not been first; that dubious honor belonged to Voldemort.

If he felt the sentence was too severe, that was a tribute to his own fine sense of justice, Harry reckoned. But he would not ask for it to be reduced, or protest it. Scrimgeour had passed beyond any sense of moderation. He would not just target Harry if he had the chance to attack again. He had to be locked away for the good of others.

Even if he was the instrument of our coming together, Harry thought, as he leaned his head against Draco’s shoulder and felt the soul-bond start up like a contented kitten. I wonder if he ever realized that?

*

Draco knew he was better at smiling than Harry. He was also better at looking into the eyes of many people at once, and at making ambiguous comments that would sound like assents and compliments at the time and only give the people asking the questions some doubts or misgivings later.

“Does Mr. Potter intend to return to the Ministry?” asked one of the older members of the Wizengamot now, a witch with immaculately groomed gray hair and sleek green robes Draco had to admire.

“The site of his curse?” Draco raised his eyebrows. “Mr. Potter has not shared, as of yet, his plans with others.”

And Harry hadn’t. Draco saw no reason to hurry him about it. He doubted that Harry would want to be an Auror again, but Harry was always surprising him—he had surprised Draco when he asked for a ring, and again when he asked for it in Slytherin colors—so he might. Since Draco had already found a few wealthy patients to Psyche-Dive for, he could keep them both in comfort without stint until Harry was ready to make his decision.

Meanwhile, it was quite refreshing to always have someone in the house ready and willing to shag, or be shagged, or have a row, or have a row while shagging.

“Does Mr. Potter intend to seek vengeance against anyone who might not have treated him well while he was under the curse?” asked a voice from the side.

Draco turned his head, and found himself looking full into Eugenie’s face. Understandably, she was a bit pale.

Draco smiled. “Of course not,” he said. “He understands that they were subject to the malicious nature of the curse and not entirely themselves.”

Eugenie closed her eyes and nodded. Draco looked carefully, and smiled more widely when he made out the faint dark scab on the side of her left hand.

Harry had been quick to take Draco’s wand away from him, but not quick enough. Draco had seen Eugenie among the crowd that morning as they made their way to their seats. A swift curse, and she was infected with a rotting disease which would slowly make her uglier than one of the magical creatures she worked with. It was indistinguishable from a number of unfortunate illnesses which sometimes showed up on their own. Eugenie might suspect the truth at last and try to tell it to someone, of course, but Draco doubted that she would have a tongue left by the time she tried.

The disease would not kill her. But it would force her to retire, and it would certainly lessen what influence she had managed to gain through her cleverness and appearance. Draco thought the price just high enough.

If Harry finds out and protests, I can always point out that using that spell on Eugenie sapped my anger, and now I don’t have any reason to visit Azkaban and try to do something else to Scrimgeour, he thought happily, and turned to answer the next question.

*

Harry sighed as they made their way back into sunshine again. “I can’t wait until that dies down,” he murmured.

Draco laughed and put an arm around his shoulders. “Forget it, Harry. You were their hero once. Now you’re their martyr, the beautiful and tragic figure who was nearly condemned to eternal loneliness—“

“Tell me you’re quoting the Daily Prophet, please.” Harry buried his head in his hands.

He felt Draco kiss the top of his hair. “Of course I am. You should read the articles sometimes, they really are quite educational.”

“Why are you keeping them?” Harry dropped his hands and looked quizzically up at his lover.

Draco’s face went unexpectedly serious, and he cupped a hand beneath Harry’s chin. Harry stared steadily back. He no longer felt unequal to arguing with Draco. Draco was quite good at it, but they were too different for his reasoning to make sense to Harry most of the time.

“Because I never want to forget,” Draco whispered. “Not what we fought for, or what we almost lost.” He bent closer and laved his tongue along the corner of Harry’s jaw, then touched his golden ring to Harry’s silver one. A spark of magic leaped between them. The jeweler who made them had been somewhat puzzled why they wanted such elaborate tracking and defensive spells built in, but she had done a marvelous job. “I am rather sensitive when it comes to my memories of you, you know.”

Harry closed his eyes to make sure he wouldn’t do something ridiculous, and then stretched up to kiss Draco briefly. He wasn’t blind to the small winces Draco made as he walked.

“Too hard a shagging last night?” he asked innocently.

“I can take anything you hand me, Potter.” Draco was using his superior Psyche-Diver tone now, and the snotty expression on his face said all too clearly that he could read people’s souls and Harry could not.

“I wasn’t questioning that.”

Draco’s eyelids lowered in the pleased look Harry was coming to know and adore.

And I’ll have years more to learn everything I can about him.

The slightly soiled feeling that had come from gazing into Scrimgeour’s eyes was already fading. Harry took a deep breath, shook his shoulders, and walked smartly beside Draco towards the Apparition point.

I don’t ever want to forget, either. I don’t think I can, but it’s good to be reminded.

He was thinking of both the struggle and the success, of the year under the curse and the warm pressure of Draco’s hand in his, as they went home.

Finite.

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A Determined Frame Of Mind EPILOGUE

Date: 2007-10-31 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenpan.livejournal.com
That was absolutely lovely. Wonderful, PERFECT. I loved the touches, the bits and pieces of Draco's protective anger, and Harry's calm gentleness. I love their rings, they're PERFECT (yay!), and I love that they apparently have shared topping - they're equal in every way, and I'm so very sad to see the close of this beautiful and AMAZING story.

Re: A Determined Frame Of Mind EPILOGUE

Date: 2007-11-01 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Harry and Draco have both definitely changed, but not so much that Harry would, say, be all right with Draco cursing Scrimgeour. I hoped to show that even up to the epilogue. I seem to have done so. :)

I'm sorry to say goodbye to them, but after the effort I exerted in the last few days, I'm also sort of relieved.

Date: 2007-10-31 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com
Brilliant story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-10-31 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raphsody606.livejournal.com
*squee*!!! You're the best!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:00 pm (UTC)

Date: 2007-10-31 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angylsmuse.livejournal.com
That was absolutely phenomenal! And what a scrumptious treat for Halloween - I can fully relate to the soul bond kitten - I'm purring like mad right now!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

It's not a very Halloween-like ending, really, but oh well.

Date: 2007-10-31 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neji-chan.livejournal.com
::weeps:: One would think that after all the books and stories I loved and finished this would be easier...

I have no words. The rings, with the colors and the spells were so beautifully symbolic. Harry taking Draco's wand, and the curse Draco used on Eugenie... And I thought I couldn't hate Scrimgeour more than already did, now I wish Draco HAD curse him.

"...it was quite refreshing to always have someone in the house ready and willing to shag, or be shagged, or have a row, or have a row while shagging." I loved that line, it summarizes their relationship perfectly.

The Frame of Mind series... it's PERFECT. They have everything I love: possessive!protective!Draco, vulnerable(but still strong)!Harry, unexpected plot twists, wonderful original characters, great storyline and characterization... I could go on and on :)

If you ever write back stories, I'll be ecstatic. Gen, het, it doesn't matter, it would give so much more insight to these two... And it wouldn't have ANYTHING to do with my need to know everything about a story I like (part of the reason LotR is my fav book)

To sum up: WONDERFUL story.

Date: 2007-11-01 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neji-chan.livejournal.com
Here's the link to the fanart (s'not much)

http://neji-chan.livejournal.com/1725.html

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From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com - Date: 2007-11-01 01:05 pm (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2007-10-31 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dysonrules.livejournal.com
Ohhhhh, the rings!!! *melts into a puddle of romantic goo*

I love this fic so much. I'm glad it's finished so that I can read the whole thing over again! Yahooooo! At the same time, I'm bummed that it's over. But there is still IGYAWM and those other awesome ideas you have, so it's all good.

LOVE Draco hexing Eugenie. love love love love She deserved it for betraying them. *gives her the evil eye*

Adored Harry's almost-pity for Scrimgeour. He went through hell and came out just as Gryffindor as he ever was. And he'll have to keep a close eye on Draco to make sure he doesn't "visit Azkaban" lol!

I can die happy now. I'm sacrificing more cheesecake to your brilliance.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you! People were making so many elaborate guesses for what Harry's gesture of permanence would be, but I think rings are quite enough.

I have lots and lots more ideas, believe me. Sometimes it feels like they're competing to crack my skull open.

I think we could argue for a long time about whether Eugenie's punishment is actually fitting, but. :)

I can just see Harry setting little alarms that will let him know if Draco Apparates in the direction of Azkaban, and Draco countering them using house-elves.

And thanks again for all your reviews!

Date: 2007-10-31 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snottygrrl.livejournal.com
well done!

it's been great fun reading this story and i loved the way the characters all responded to the different situations and that everyone had their quirks.

thanks for an entertaining read. [*smooches*]

Date: 2007-11-01 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad the characters were individuals to you; one thing I particularly hate is when the characters just become chesspieces for the plot.

Date: 2007-10-31 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vwalk.livejournal.com
I howled with laughter at Draco’s commentary during the trial. I can totally see him trying to curse Scrimgeour on the sly and Harry almost having to wrestle his wand away from him. (cause I just know he didn’t give it up easily). I can picture him in my mind saying “c’mon Harry – just one little hex).
“Meanwhile, it was quite refreshing to always have someone in the house ready and willing to shag, or be shagged, or have a row, or have a row while shagging.” My favorite line of the entire series I think.
And this one; “Of course, if you would let me have my wand back, then I could make sure his life is even more interesting after this.” This is so Draco. I’m sure that his definition of ‘interesting’ in this context is pretty scary. :D
I’m glad that Eugenie didn’t escape retribution. Granted she had no real reason to be loyal to Harry or Draco if Scrimgeour offered her more money. I’m sure she thought she was betting on the winning horse. But I can’t imagine protective!Draco allowing her to get away with her betrayal. I think that her punishment was perfect. Her inner ugliness will become outward.
As usual your Harry/Draco banter is witty and hilarious. Thank you for ending on such a light, yet tender note. And the rings are perfect.
Wonderfully done. Perfect ending. Congratulations on another brilliant story! :D

Date: 2007-11-01 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Heh, well, in this case Harry snatched the wand away so fast that Draco didn't have a chance to struggle for it. :)

Draco had better ideas than even rotting diseases for Scrimgeour a few moments later.

Draco might have been willing to forgive Eugenie's betrayal if it were over something less important to him, because he understands her attitude. But anyone who hurts Harry, or who conspires to take his memories of Harry away, sort of attracts his irrational anger. There was no way he was going to be anything less than mad after that.

And thank you!

Date: 2007-10-31 09:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittie8571.livejournal.com
This was such a lovely story. I look forward to your new ones and finishing up IGYAWM. Well done.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-10-31 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zahdahe.livejournal.com
I don't normally comment on HP stuff cos basically I'm just fighting to keep up with the multitude of stuff. However you are one of the first writers I discovered when I ventured into the HP world(or crazy as I like to call it cost my BSG crazy had calmed down somewhat)on reading the first chapter of your very first story I just gave in and gorged myself on your writing. You always surprise and inspire me and make me hungry for more and I always come back for more GREEDY ME! This lastest work has left me dumbstuck with AWE, yes AWE! You gets capslock, they are well deserved. You are a truly versatile author who gently teases the reader in and then drags them along on a rollercoaster of a ride with your wordplay. I kneel at you feet and hold out my fic bowl and am BEGGING for MORE! I throw all kinds of sweets, savouries and beverages at you and agree with all the comments made by the other devotees to your words. PLEASE! KEEP WRITING! PLEASE, ITS MY NEW ADDICTION! AND ITS HEALTHY!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Well, hello! I'm very flattered to know that I've addicted you and attracted you into commenting. :)

I won't be posting anything new for a few days (I badly need to work on a fest fic I neglected so I could finish up this story), but then IGYAWM will start moving again.

Date: 2007-10-31 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-10-31 10:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damedbx.livejournal.com
;_; it's over!! but i haven't read it yet. LOL

I am right now! i cannot wait to finish it. I also can't believe that I am about to finish it!

It's been a fun wild ride!!XD

Date: 2007-11-01 01:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you! And thanks for reviewing.

Date: 2007-10-31 10:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sofiaottoman.livejournal.com
Fantastic story! I really enjoyed reading it. The ending was perfect.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thanks! I did like the epilogue; I think the story would have continued to go on forever if I'd tried to tie up the loose ends in a different way. (There would always be one more struggle with Ron and Hermione to show, or a fight between Harry and Draco).

Date: 2007-10-31 10:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] romaine24.livejournal.com
I really hope you know how much we all enjoy your incredible stories. I know from the beginning of each one that I will fall in love with h/d all over again. You are a great storyteller.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! H/D is definitely my favorite pairing, and I plan to keep on writing stories about them well into the future.

Date: 2007-10-31 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astartes-amazon.livejournal.com
A review for all the times I haven't reviewed.

Absolutely lovely. Every chapter, and the way you've finished this, is written beautifully.

The only thing that grates on me is Eugenie's punishment. That is beyond foul. I understand that it's there to show that Draco isn't all sunshine and light now that he has Harry, but the idea of it makes me feel physically ill.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I'm glad you had the reaction to Eugenie's punishment; I hoped that at least one person would. Draco is damn scary. It's mitigated because we're reading about him from his POV and from that of Harry, someone he has no reason to hurt. I wanted, though, to show what his fury and his possessiveness would mean to someone who wasn't either one of them.

Date: 2007-10-31 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenqueen55.livejournal.com
Absolutely perfect. I adore it. What an amazing journey you've taken us on...

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

thank you thank you thank you

Date: 2007-10-31 11:12 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wonderful in so many delicious ways!

Date: 2007-10-31 11:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dairygirl.livejournal.com
I am sad your story has ended, but a very satisfactory journey. I enjoy your writing and your creative story ideas. Here, your creativity generated a nasty new curse and a new occupation. As always, your vision of Harry and Draco are interesting. Draco is one determined, self-confident individual--even here still wanting to curse the Minister (and did get Eugenie). Strangely, I thought this was a trilogy so I had expected more. There is nothing I truly desire at your ending except maybe how Harry and Draco progress in the world. The hints of true happiness for a long life is lovely. Thank you for all the time and energy you invested in this story. It was well worth the time to write and for me to read.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this. I felt so deliciously evil when I came up with the Cassandra Curse. :)

Originally, I was toying with the idea of making this a trilogy; the third story would have been about Harry and Draco cleaning up the corruption in the Ministry that had led to tolerance of people like Scrimgeour. But by about halfway through this one, I couldn't see either Harry or Draco as I'd characterized them being interested in doing such a thing.

I think you can assume that they lived happily ever after for a long, long time. :)

Date: 2007-10-31 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chris16dh.livejournal.com
this is just absolutely beautiful! i don't have the words to describe how good of a read this was, just amazing!

i ,just like draco, think that azkaban is not enough, they should kill that poor excuse for a human, but i'm sure harry won't agree to kill hom slowly and panfully, would he? ;]

i can't believe that this is the end of this! i'm now going to read the other WIP but i expect MORE! MORE! MORE! you should write so mach fic that i'll become giddy and start singing "it's raining fic" and go into a great fic high! yep! no really, it's so good to know that when i read your work it will always be just what i need.
thank you for this wonderful story and just for writing too.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

No. So far as Harry is concerned, Scrimgeour is suffering just enough (he understands at the end that Bad Things would happen if Scrimgeour were let go).

More stories will come, but not for a few days. I have to rest and work on a fest fic.

Date: 2007-11-01 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silver-ariel.livejournal.com
Oh, this was such a satisfying ending to a wonderful story. You should definitely be proud of yourself.

Obviously, Scrimgeour will go to his grave loathing and blaming Harry, but he did it to himself. I have no sympathy for him whatsoever.

I love that Harry and Draco exchanged rings. How they're unashamed of being affectionate in public. How Draco helps keep the paparazzi at bay. How they obviously trust each other implicitly. And how they are different yet equal partners, how they understand each other's desires, even if they don't agree (Harry took Draco's wand away--brilliant!). How they are so protective of each other. How each is strong on his own but undefeatable together. How they swap topping. ;D

I'm glad Draco was able to get back at Eugenie, even if it was a terrible vengeance. I do feel sorry for her, a bit.

I was very happy about the way the meeting with Ron, Hermione, and Ginny went. Ginny was very grown up about it, understanding, whereas Ron and Hermione were not. Really, how could they honestly expect things to just go back to how they were before? How could they, when they hurt Harry so badly? Yes, they were victims, too, but the things they said, the things they did, how could they fathom that wounds like that could just be vanished away with the ending of the curse? I was disappointed with their naivety, and I cheered when Harry stood his ground with them. But I am glad that they were willing to work at being friends with Harry again. That, if nothing else, shows how much they love him. So I suppose it all turned out okay.

I have loved every step in this story, and now that it's complete, I can save it on my computer.

And I can't wait for your next work, and for you to continue I Give You a Wondrous Mirror.

Well done.

Date: 2007-11-01 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

I can understand Scrimgeour, but I don't think I can really sympathize with him. As you've pointed out, he did everything to himself, and his paranoid delusions are not true- so he can't claim that he was actually saving the country from Harry or whatever.

Harry and Draco have really passed through the fire to get where they are now. I can see them still arguing and disagreeing and having far from a perfect life, but they won't get tangled up in power games or take each other for granted.

I think I would have tackled Draco if I were there. I wanted to show he can be genuinely scary, and provide a bit of a window for how he probably looks to other people, if the reader wanted to take it.

Really, how could they honestly expect things to just go back to how they were before? How could they, when they hurt Harry so badly? Yes, they were victims, too,

I think the last part of it was ruling their behavior. Just as some people don't think they should be held responsible for what they do under the influence of alcohol, Ron and Hermione were hoping the curse would excuse them. They were sorry, and it's true that they didn't choose to be under the curse the way people choose to drink, but still. The harm is there and done. Trying to run away from the consequences does no one any good.

I'll be continuing IGYAWM in a few days. I really, really need to work on a fest fic that I have been shamefully neglecting first.

Date: 2007-11-01 12:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] spae.livejournal.com
So very wonderful ... a very good story which explores the harry/draco dynamic so very well. what a fantastic imagination you have!

Date: 2007-11-01 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2007-11-01 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brookmctirre.livejournal.com
Wow, just wow. A perfect end. I'll come back when I am more coherent.

Date: 2007-11-01 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2007-11-01 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] icyaurora8.livejournal.com
i'm sorry i've not commented on the quite a few of the most recent chapters, but i have to now that it's over (too much homework, lol). i just adored this story.

you do such an amazing job at writing the characters, and i like how Harry didn't fall back into old habits of just forgiving because he now knows he didn't do anything wrong, and he has a right to ask for the work of a friendship. i really enjoyed what you did to Scrimgeour too, i saw it as very fitting, but not too dark, though Draco would have preferred more vengeance.

i NEVER read works in progress hardly, because i find it hard to keep up, and i hate cliffhangers. but you wrote this so well, i was always so excited when another chapter was posted, and it was definitely worth reading as a WIP.

great job! as i've enjoyed your writing so much, i've been trying to read all of your other stories lately too :-)

Date: 2007-11-01 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
That's all right! Thanks for commenting now.

Draco strengthened Harry in so many ways. If Harry weren't able to hold his ground and fight for what HE wants, too, there's no way he could be in an equal relationship with Draco. He still loves Ron and Hermione, but he has seen that he can argue with someone whom he loves and still have them in the end, so he applies the lessons to them, too.

Date: 2007-11-01 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mirrorwakes.livejournal.com
Oh I love happy endings! Thank you for writing! It's been a WONDERFUL story! I think once again I've used up my exclamation-quota for the week.

Date: 2007-11-01 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Here are some exclamation points for you: !!!!!!!!!!!!

Date: 2007-11-01 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kbybee.livejournal.com
I cannot believe it's over. It's been a long time coming.

This entire series has completely blown me away. You are a very in depth writer, and there is always a reason for your twists and turns. I have enjoyed reading this, which is not hard to believe. (Although I am waiting for an update on IGYAWM. I totally love it. And I hope you have a way for Harry to get out of his horrid marriage vows to that heartless Weasel. How she calls herself a mother, I will never know.)

Once again, wonderful job... I look forward to your future writings.

(If I sounded too harsh about Ginny, Im sorry. I have never liked her, although some authors are able to portray her in a different light then JKR did.)

Date: 2007-11-01 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! This was a story where I did NOT know what the end would be when I began, so I'm glad it feels plotted even if it really wasn't. :)

(I know what the ending will be for IGYAWM, but it won't be updated until Monday, I'm afraid).

(I feel largely neutral towards Ginny, but precisely for that reason I keep twisting her in different ways).
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