Oy...that was a nail biter. I haven't commented until now, but I felt the need to tell you that you've sucked me into this story. That's the sign of a great author--when your reader becomes emotionally invested in the story. Thank you for writing this. I'm looking forward to finishing it and reading other of your stories.
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Date: 2008-09-08 03:13 am (UTC)Cheers
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