I didn't keep up with reading hds_beltane, so I had missed both your stories. But I read them and they were delightful. And honestly only a few days ago, when you posted your last oneshot I was thinking that I'd love to see a Snarry by you. And then I discovered that you've braved that territory. That was just great to see.
Kestrel
I loved your Snape, his anger, his stuck up hatred for Harry, his infatuation with him. I just loved the wings. You turned a age-old human dream (I am sure there's not a single person who hasn't dreamt of flying) into a beautiful story. And once again you created an original and absolutely fantastic profession for a character of yours. I liked how Snape felt about his work and his creations, especially the Kestrel.
I loved your Harry in Kestrel. He had kept that spark of childish curiosity and love for life that made him so lively and full of energy. The way he enticed Snape was great.
When in Flight
I loved the plot. In the beginning I didn't expect that the childish prank (as I saw it) would grow into such stupidity and maliciousness on the students' part. It was sad that those kids destroyed their future and marked their housemates to be suspected of every Quidditch incident that would happen for some time.
But the Harry/Draco interaction was love. Draco's anger/public sex kinks and Harry's glasses kink felt great. And the sex was hot! Guh! Well done.
Those were lovely fics and I can only hope you'll write more Snarry (which is my OTP), or that maybe you'll even try a threesome, some lovely day :).
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Date: 2008-06-11 12:44 pm (UTC)Kestrel
I loved your Snape, his anger, his stuck up hatred for Harry, his infatuation with him. I just loved the wings. You turned a age-old human dream (I am sure there's not a single person who hasn't dreamt of flying) into a beautiful story. And once again you created an original and absolutely fantastic profession for a character of yours. I liked how Snape felt about his work and his creations, especially the Kestrel.
I loved your Harry in Kestrel. He had kept that spark of childish curiosity and love for life that made him so lively and full of energy. The way he enticed Snape was great.
When in Flight
I loved the plot. In the beginning I didn't expect that the childish prank (as I saw it) would grow into such stupidity and maliciousness on the students' part. It was sad that those kids destroyed their future and marked their housemates to be suspected of every Quidditch incident that would happen for some time.
But the Harry/Draco interaction was love. Draco's anger/public sex kinks and Harry's glasses kink felt great. And the sex was hot! Guh! Well done.
Those were lovely fics and I can only hope you'll write more Snarry (which is my OTP), or that maybe you'll even try a threesome, some lovely day :).