Some excellent stuff here!!! Harry's layered spells were brilliant and very creative. Lucius - hmm... those strange wand movements felt like signals to the rest of the offensive crew, and I was really very excited by the way Harry handled each of the problems.
Oh, Ron. I so wish that confrontation didn't take place, and it was interesting to see Harry's reaction to Ron's spell. Perhaps the sickness was a combination of the spell and a stress response to the situation, and can I just ADORE the way 'Gerald' came in and handled things for a while, but then faded into the background so that Harry could deal with Draco. I thought it was a really good way to describe Harry's mental process and how difficult it was for him to force his own personality into the forefront.
Kick arse chapter. Really stressful and filled with tension.
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Date: 2008-06-09 01:46 am (UTC)Oh, Ron. I so wish that confrontation didn't take place, and it was interesting to see Harry's reaction to Ron's spell. Perhaps the sickness was a combination of the spell and a stress response to the situation, and can I just ADORE the way 'Gerald' came in and handled things for a while, but then faded into the background so that Harry could deal with Draco. I thought it was a really good way to describe Harry's mental process and how difficult it was for him to force his own personality into the forefront.
Kick arse chapter. Really stressful and filled with tension.