Heh, well, thank you very much! But if you do spot something you think is confusing or could be clarified, then feel free to talk about it. The nice thing about critique on a WiP is that I can change things before they freeze into place.
Draco will still have a hard time making Harry indulge if Harry doesn't feel he's worked hard that day. Harry feels that indulgence in things like nice clothes or food is something he has to earn.
If Draco ever overhears Nusante, he'll strike out. Not that Harry would be very happy about that, either.
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Date: 2008-06-07 03:03 pm (UTC)Draco will still have a hard time making Harry indulge if Harry doesn't feel he's worked hard that day. Harry feels that indulgence in things like nice clothes or food is something he has to earn.
If Draco ever overhears Nusante, he'll strike out. Not that Harry would be very happy about that, either.