Very interesting! I like the idea of the spell, even if the grammar makes me wince. I feel so bad for Draco - he's so reliant on his parents in canon and that doesn't seem to have changed. And Narcissa, too - her husband didn't tell her! Harry's actually reacting well, I think; his thoughts were spiteful but he's kept them to himself. Onto the next part to see where this is going!
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Date: 2009-05-21 03:49 am (UTC)