Though it's not a definite squick for me, I don't really like that either. I think the problem is that the length of the story ends up mattering more than the relationship, so it rushes into sex immediately. Although, even then, the author could start out with a bit of backstory to explain how they became friendlier if the length will be a problem.
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Date: 2008-06-04 02:00 pm (UTC)And thank you!