Just when I thought you couldn't possibly be able to create more painful cliffhangers, bam! You go prove me wrong.
This chapter was just..wow in every way. Each action the character does add another layer of emotions. I especially liked the part where Draco was prepared to catch Harry if he fainted. They do care about each other, even with all the deception, frustration and the angst to come.
I really really want to read Harry 's explanation. He promises to tell the truth, but how much? About metamorphosis, certainly (AUGH I WANT TO SEE DRACO'S GOBSMACKED EXPRESSION NOW. YOU EVIL EVIL AUTHOR) Will he admit to feeling that the real Harry Potter is a 'hollow shell'? What about the creepiness that is the reverse pensieve?
I want to rant and analyze every single line of this chapter because every single line made me shivery, but I'm incoherent right now and would just like to say that finally, finally they both admit they were acting stupidly and things will get a bit better now right? Right? And Ron is a moron.
I'm sorry for being so pushy. You've been so good at updating, I really shouldn't whine so much. But (there's always a but isn't there?) can you give us an estimate at what day will be your next update? I have the irrational urge to check for an update now and I don't think the urge will go away anytime soon. So. For the sake of my studies. I promise I would tone down the fangirlishness in my next review, Maybe.
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Date: 2008-05-04 06:21 pm (UTC)This chapter was just..wow in every way. Each action the character does add another layer of emotions. I especially liked the part where Draco was prepared to catch Harry if he fainted. They do care about each other, even with all the deception, frustration and the angst to come.
I really really want to read Harry 's explanation. He promises to tell the truth, but how much? About metamorphosis, certainly (AUGH I WANT TO SEE DRACO'S GOBSMACKED EXPRESSION NOW. YOU EVIL EVIL AUTHOR) Will he admit to feeling that the real Harry Potter is a 'hollow shell'? What about the creepiness that is the reverse pensieve?
I want to rant and analyze every single line of this chapter because every single line made me shivery, but I'm incoherent right now and would just like to say that finally, finally they both admit they were acting stupidly and things will get a bit better now right? Right? And Ron is a moron.
I'm sorry for being so pushy. You've been so good at updating, I really shouldn't whine so much. But (there's always a but isn't there?) can you give us an estimate at what day will be your next update? I have the irrational urge to check for an update now and I don't think the urge will go away anytime soon. So. For the sake of my studies. I promise I would tone down the fangirlishness in my next review, Maybe.