Very good beginning. There was a line that struck me: "Thank you for making your mother so happy." So what about her child's happiness, shouldn't that come before hers? I suspect this story is going to make me glad more than once that we don't live in times like that anymore.
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Date: 2008-07-08 05:41 pm (UTC)