lomonaaeren

I absolutely loved how you wrote the first part of the chapter. The sheer alien-ness of it was brilliantly portrayed. I could almost see Harry's consciousness dispersing into the atmosphere. I loved that the light had no identity other than light and Draco was simply the center. The way Harry's tenuous connection with the Center and then later with Draco and ultimately his own identity was eerie in a good way. I loved it - very well written. In a way I almost feel more sorry for Harry than I do Draco. Even with all that has happened to Draco, he doesn't suffer from the 'crisis of self identity' that Harry is struggling with. I think Harry's assessment of Draco's thoughts are pretty accurate, but I do like the fact that we can't actually get inside Draco's head to hear his POV. Great update. Looking forward to the next one.