Well. Daphne is just a tad bit psycho. Obviously she gets off on his pain. But this was more than pain. This was nearly murder.
He really needs to tell Harry. About Daphne, about him wanting Harry off the potion. Harry might not react well at first, but it's clear that Harry is falling for Draco, so he'll want to do whatever he can to help.
This last scene was rather too realistic. Having just dealt with my fiance's heart attack, I felt that fear again for Draco when I read this. I know it's fiction, but you write it so well, so realistically, that I was momentarily back in that emotional space of sheer terror. I'm so glad Patty was able to help him.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 2008-02-28 01:47 am (UTC)He really needs to tell Harry. About Daphne, about him wanting Harry off the potion. Harry might not react well at first, but it's clear that Harry is falling for Draco, so he'll want to do whatever he can to help.
This last scene was rather too realistic. Having just dealt with my fiance's heart attack, I felt that fear again for Draco when I read this. I know it's fiction, but you write it so well, so realistically, that I was momentarily back in that emotional space of sheer terror. I'm so glad Patty was able to help him.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.