o.O Umbridge? Well, that's certainly not someone I even thought of... However, the way she died was very creative and hilariously funny. At first I thought, Hey, maybe she hated herself, thus explaining her evilness, and her greatest Desire was to die. -Snort- You're idea for her demise was, obviously, much better than mine. -hangs head-
Okay...Now. The speed with which Harry accepted the veritaserum annoyed me in this chapter. He's that quick to just open all his secrets up? Is this just because he trusts Shacklebolt and, well, has already been under Veritaserum with Draco? I don't think it's uncharacteristic, just not very cautious of him.
Hermione was written very well again in this chapter and the interaction between Draco and Hermione was perfect in the previous chapter. I also like how Harry was the one who had to cool them down and then they sort of banded together and turned on Harry. xD Very fun.
About a Ginny and Harry reunion: Yay! I know that Harry isn't going to go into that sort of thing thinking, "Well, maybe now I can get off this potion" but I'm hoping that after a long while, with his guilt being slowly taken away and Draco and Hermione wearing him down, he just might stop taking it. Cheers to this. (Unless it's a plot of some kind by the Villainous Duo...Then it's just cruel.)
-Hugs Draco!- His heart was beating like a hummingbird's indeed. D: Daphne is one scary, scary witch. And what, was she threatening Harry? Seriously? Or threatening Draco for spending time with Harry and getting attached to him? Or just being a sadistic control freak? I think it's probably the last but...ew. Just. Ew.
Although I am wondering about the milk comment...
Wow. Well. I think that's all. Uum. Great job as usual, your story gives me inspiration to write such long reviews. (Er...which is the way it's supposed to work, I think... O.o Just...yours are the only stories where my reviews are so long. :P) Thank you, thank you, thank you.
And until next time, Aloony PS. Sorry if the review is all disjointed, it's 5 am...And that's my excuse. I'm sticking with it.
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Date: 2008-02-25 01:41 am (UTC)Okay...Now. The speed with which Harry accepted the veritaserum annoyed me in this chapter. He's that quick to just open all his secrets up? Is this just because he trusts Shacklebolt and, well, has already been under Veritaserum with Draco? I don't think it's uncharacteristic, just not very cautious of him.
Hermione was written very well again in this chapter and the interaction between Draco and Hermione was perfect in the previous chapter. I also like how Harry was the one who had to cool them down and then they sort of banded together and turned on Harry. xD Very fun.
About a Ginny and Harry reunion: Yay! I know that Harry isn't going to go into that sort of thing thinking, "Well, maybe now I can get off this potion" but I'm hoping that after a long while, with his guilt being slowly taken away and Draco and Hermione wearing him down, he just might stop taking it. Cheers to this. (Unless it's a plot of some kind by the Villainous Duo...Then it's just cruel.)
-Hugs Draco!- His heart was beating like a hummingbird's indeed. D: Daphne is one scary, scary witch. And what, was she threatening Harry? Seriously? Or threatening Draco for spending time with Harry and getting attached to him? Or just being a sadistic control freak? I think it's probably the last but...ew. Just. Ew.
Although I am wondering about the milk comment...
Wow. Well. I think that's all. Uum. Great job as usual, your story gives me inspiration to write such long reviews. (Er...which is the way it's supposed to work, I think... O.o Just...yours are the only stories where my reviews are so long. :P) Thank you, thank you, thank you.
And until next time,
Aloony
PS. Sorry if the review is all disjointed, it's 5 am...And that's my excuse. I'm sticking with it.