Excellent riting!! You really had me believing that Harry was still the maze. I kept saying this is a dream, Harry’s dreaming – but only half believing it. Very well done. The comment about Draco’s expression mirroring that of Harry’s adoring fans was a real ouch moment. For me it did more than any other single thing to describe the unhealthy level of Draco’s obsessive love for Harry (well done). Each time we see Agarwal I like her more. Her strict no-nonsense approach is brilliant – and effective. OMG!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US WITH THAT CLIFF-HANGER!!! I Absolutely Can't Wait to see the Harry/Rita confrontation.
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Date: 2008-02-24 09:37 pm (UTC)The comment about Draco’s expression mirroring that of Harry’s adoring fans was a real ouch moment. For me it did more than any other single thing to describe the unhealthy level of Draco’s obsessive love for Harry (well done).
Each time we see Agarwal I like her more. Her strict no-nonsense approach is brilliant – and effective.
OMG!!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US WITH THAT CLIFF-HANGER!!!
I Absolutely Can't Wait to see the Harry/Rita confrontation.