Lovely as always, I was so happy to see this story updated (I know you are working on your other story as well).
I love the way you have written Hermione. Usually she is a bossy, know-it-all with no personality, you have made her human and yet still in character and I love that. I think this is one of the first times I have actually cared what happens to her.
Ohhh and flirty Harry...I can't wait to see more of that, course Draco had to go and be stupid...still want to slap him but I am sure Harry will get him fixed in the end...course he has his own bit of stupidity to resolve as well.
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Date: 2008-02-13 04:54 pm (UTC)I love the way you have written Hermione. Usually she is a bossy, know-it-all with no personality, you have made her human and yet still in character and I love that. I think this is one of the first times I have actually cared what happens to her.
Ohhh and flirty Harry...I can't wait to see more of that, course Draco had to go and be stupid...still want to slap him but I am sure Harry will get him fixed in the end...course he has his own bit of stupidity to resolve as well.
Boys!!!