OMG this is amazing!! I love everything about it, from that first sentence, to the way Harry's day started normal as usual and then Malfoy happened and nothing was the same after their talk. How you feel Harry's the victim but then he does things that make you realize he's not... right. How the time in the Manor is calm, with that foreboding feeling that Bad Things Are Gonna Happen And Harry Should Run Now. How you drop little hints about what was going to really happen: the fruit, Harry feeling he knew Draco... And the ending was perfect. I feel a little sorry for Harry's fate, but happy for Draco. He got his Daddy now who he clearly loves.
I'm sorry this doesn't make any sense ::lol:: Have you read Stephen King? This one-shot reminds me of his stories. Anyway, this was extremely different from your usual writing but just as good. Love it :)
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Date: 2008-01-05 07:59 pm (UTC)I'm sorry this doesn't make any sense ::lol:: Have you read Stephen King? This one-shot reminds me of his stories. Anyway, this was extremely different from your usual writing but just as good. Love it :)