This was good; I'm happy for Draco, even though he's creepy and just plain ole crazy :)
For some reason, I didn't have much sympathy for Harry either, I was more upset by Draco's grief at Lucius' death and moved by the extent he'll go to raise his father.
*shrugs* maybe it's the lack of communication between Ginny & Harry? She sees him morphing into Lucius and sleeptalking lunacy and the first time she brings it up is when she's having him committed? Not exactly a dastardly deed that deserves death, but not endearing either.
Really really liked the last section, surreal, content, and almost quiet and then the edges of madness starts seeping in...
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Date: 2008-01-05 05:17 am (UTC)For some reason, I didn't have much sympathy for Harry either, I was more upset by Draco's grief at Lucius' death and moved by the extent he'll go to raise his father.
*shrugs* maybe it's the lack of communication between Ginny & Harry? She sees him morphing into Lucius and sleeptalking lunacy and the first time she brings it up is when she's having him committed? Not exactly a dastardly deed that deserves death, but not endearing either.
Really really liked the last section, surreal, content, and almost quiet and then the edges of madness starts seeping in...