yes, yes, yes! This was a good chapter. First- all h/d authors mention the hand shaking symbolism at some point during their stories. They have to, because Draco is hung up psychologically on the gesture, as it pinpoints where their whole dynamic began to go wrong. But you are CLEVER here, because it is a)a one sided revelation and b) the revelation is an ECHO of Draco mentally knowing the symbolism of the brewing ingredients. Really, an engaging chapter. Loved it, you clever author you!
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Date: 2008-01-03 04:39 am (UTC)