I was fighting the urge to cry with all i had at one point ( i hate crying) You captured that desolate, empty feeling that occurs when someone you love dies so well. Traumatic but beautiful at the same tim,e your choice of language weaved together was again beautiful.
I could not walk away from this story now if i tried and i am really not going to try in fact i will be running to the next chapter with gusto.
I am so curious over all those hints you have left i need to know...
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Date: 2008-02-15 06:05 pm (UTC)I was fighting the urge to cry with all i had at one point ( i hate crying) You captured that desolate, empty feeling that occurs when someone you love dies so well. Traumatic but beautiful at the same tim,e your choice of language weaved together was again beautiful.
I could not walk away from this story now if i tried and i am really not going to try in fact i will be running to the next chapter with gusto.
I am so curious over all those hints you have left i need to know...
damn you're good!