Now that I've somewhat recovered from the fantastic sex (Harry and Draco's, not mine unfortunately :]. I'd love to know what's going through Hermione's mind right now. Obviously her perspective is changing, but I'm wondering how the first hand view affected her. I like the way her voice got stronger as she moved back into her known area of strength, "the gift of knowledge, the only one she could offer, would be enough to soothe his pain and panic." I absolutely loved the ending; "It wasn’t perfect yet. It still wasn’t real, for one thing. But it was theirs, it was shared and entirely mutual enjoyment with the man Harry hadn’t thought he’d ever call partner, and it had lit, once again, the flame of his determination that nothing could stop this. No matter what obstacles they had to go through on the road to getting rid of the marriage vows and outwitting the life-debt magic, they were worth it, for this: the warmth and the closeness, the heavy laxity of Harry’s muscles and the soft whistle of Draco’s breath." I'm really glad to see Harry's determination.
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Date: 2007-11-16 10:56 pm (UTC)I absolutely loved the ending; "It wasn’t perfect yet. It still wasn’t real, for one thing. But it was theirs, it was shared and entirely mutual enjoyment with the man Harry hadn’t thought he’d ever call partner, and it had lit, once again, the flame of his determination that nothing could stop this.
No matter what obstacles they had to go through on the road to getting rid of the marriage vows and outwitting the life-debt magic, they were worth it, for this: the warmth and the closeness, the heavy laxity of Harry’s muscles and the soft whistle of Draco’s breath."
I'm really glad to see Harry's determination.