Date: 2007-10-22 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenqueen55.livejournal.com
Very nicely done...I like how you pacified us there at the end with the declaration of love! No sex, but damn it...they love each other. *sighs*

I love their relationship, and how you tell the story with changing POV. Thoroughly enjoy that.

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