Date: 2009-11-27 11:46 pm (UTC)
Very nice, although it was sometimes difficult to continue marinating in Al's self-pitying bile LOL. It wouldn't have stood out quite *as* much if Scorpius hadn't become quite mature while Al was still clinging to his simplistic worldview; but I suppose that in the end, A. "grew up" enough for he and S. to get back together. The disfunctional non-relationship that he had with his father was rather painful, though. I have mixed feelings. But as always, the characterizations, descriptive language, amusing bits and so on were great ;) I liked Draco threatening to turn Albus into a smear of ash and then "swishing" away *g*
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