Thank you! I think couplets are always dangerous; long before Dr. Seuss, they could sound bad if the poet using them wasn't careful. But they were about the only rhyme pattern that would work for this particular story.
I have used that particular alternating POV trick before, so I just mostly had to take care with the pronouns and decide when I wanted to start returning to normal.
I can see this Harry being awkward enough to ask for something like that, but yeah, I mostly put it in there so my story wouldn't seem too out of place in the fest.
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Date: 2009-11-21 02:00 am (UTC)I have used that particular alternating POV trick before, so I just mostly had to take care with the pronouns and decide when I wanted to start returning to normal.
I can see this Harry being awkward enough to ask for something like that, but yeah, I mostly put it in there so my story wouldn't seem too out of place in the fest.
Thank you!