Firstly let me say- blasphemy! Your imagination should definitely not be muzzled, it should be allowed to run wild and come up with these amazing, amazing plot lines which you somehow end up making into coherent, beautiful stories.
In terms of the plot I think it is sufficiently separate from Universal Chaos because it's about Harry's experiences in both worlds concurrently. I also think that there is a lot more you can do with the alternate universes theme and this story may allow you to take it that much deeper, it may allow you to build on the foundations you set in Universal Chaos.
Universal Chaos has always been one of my favorite stories of yours because of the concept of alternate universes and I always find myself thinking back to it at odd moments. I was always a little saddened for the Draco from Harry's world because if he were to find out he would feel so conflicted and replaceable. So on that selfish note, I would like to suggest that it would be a great idea to write this story. =)
[Also, I really like the 'Sleepless', another I would suggest is 'Waken' =)]
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Date: 2009-10-20 03:10 am (UTC)In terms of the plot I think it is sufficiently separate from Universal Chaos because it's about Harry's experiences in both worlds concurrently. I also think that there is a lot more you can do with the alternate universes theme and this story may allow you to take it that much deeper, it may allow you to build on the foundations you set in Universal Chaos.
Universal Chaos has always been one of my favorite stories of yours because of the concept of alternate universes and I always find myself thinking back to it at odd moments. I was always a little saddened for the Draco from Harry's world because if he were to find out he would feel so conflicted and replaceable. So on that selfish note, I would like to suggest that it would be a great idea to write this story. =)
[Also, I really like the 'Sleepless', another I would suggest is 'Waken' =)]