This was a really good and unusual story. I like that you were reasonable and realistic with their reactions to each other rather than just relying on cliched responses.. Ron always freaks out, Harry is always upset at being manipulated -regardless of by who and why, Draco is always slightly sinister and, even if he is a good guy he works alone. Real people aren't so predictable or cookie cutter. I love that Draco actually went to Kingsley and told him about Keatson and then when he knew he still would have to endure an investigation - well heck, be a Slytherin about it and get what you want! - Go Draco! And it was nice to see that seeing those memories of how badly he was losing control really hit Harry in the right way, enough to know he needed help and to make understanding why Kingsley would work with Draco to help him much easier and palatable.
Really wonderful and rich story, especially for the length. I loved it.
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Date: 2009-10-06 03:08 am (UTC)Really wonderful and rich story, especially for the length. I loved it.
Clare