Date: 2009-09-11 04:19 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
As promised, the word fantasize was used instead of dreams. I guess I read into connotations too much sometimes, but they make stories so much more intriguing. I blame poetry for making me read into things so deeply. Ah well.
Flying knives sound fun. I guess it just leaves me to wonder: if someone wants something badly enough, could fantasy be forced to become reality because that itself is the fantasy? If you understood that sentence, you win proverbial cookies. That was confusing.
Harry reassures everyone in this story: Ron, Anna Keatson, Kingsley, everyone but Draco, really, and sometimes him too. Only Draco seems to have enough outside interest in Harry to break past that or demand more. Gah, I can't wait for Harry to take a breather. Seriously, the man's making me lose my breath, he's so closed up and intense.
And, of course, that last little scene. I am so envisioning a scene in a black-and-white noir film, with Harry slowly scanning his eyes up Draco's body and clutching his suit jacket pocket at the end, or grabbing his hat and whistling. Though that wouldn't actually happen in this story, but sounds sexy anyway.
Can't wait for the next update.
-Jolene
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