I'm starting to think it'd be better to wait until it's finished so the wait for the next chapter wouldn't kill me ><
I'm curious about Shadow and Malfoy's relationship. She seems to know quite a bit about Malfoy (Harry calling Draco by his last name makes me do it without noticing, haha. I like when he starts calling him Draco in your fics, it's always a turning point for them). I was happy to hear about Malfoy's reasons for opening this club, they made sense. And I feel sorry for him, because I believe he wants to help Harry. I also feel sorry and sad for Harry; he acts as if he's so used to the idea that he'll never have what he longs for, that seeing those desires materialize would hurt him with the knowledge that they are not real.
The desire for a change, for a rest, for someone who would trust Harry and be worthy of trust sometimes ached in him as if he had a chronic disease.
I liked that sentence, depressing as it is. I think the problem here is Harry's trust. The fact that he doesn't trust his friends says a lot. I'm rooting for Malfoy to earn his trust and deserve it.
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Date: 2009-09-03 07:31 pm (UTC)I'm curious about Shadow and Malfoy's relationship. She seems to know quite a bit about Malfoy (Harry calling Draco by his last name makes me do it without noticing, haha. I like when he starts calling him Draco in your fics, it's always a turning point for them).
I was happy to hear about Malfoy's reasons for opening this club, they made sense. And I feel sorry for him, because I believe he wants to help Harry. I also feel sorry and sad for Harry; he acts as if he's so used to the idea that he'll never have what he longs for, that seeing those desires materialize would hurt him with the knowledge that they are not real.
The desire for a change, for a rest, for someone who would trust Harry and be worthy of trust sometimes ached in him as if he had a chronic disease.
I liked that sentence, depressing as it is. I think the problem here is Harry's trust. The fact that he doesn't trust his friends says a lot. I'm rooting for Malfoy to earn his trust and deserve it.