Great chapter! I love Adela Pole, and then Harry's reentry into the murky world of the club - it definitely feels like the exoticized opium den for your noir ;) Draco does come across as if he's on drugs (or is a creepy stalker / serial killer!), but presumably he's just been immersed in his and other people's fantasy worlds for far too long. I can't wait for the next installment.
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Date: 2009-09-03 07:29 pm (UTC)