This was great. I really like the pacing in this and how you kept it only in Harry's POV. I normally like it when you flip flop the POVs but this was perfect as is.
A thought struck me in the middle of reading this. I think all of the H/D fics I have read cover the beginnings of a romance, or the beginnings of a second romance after a bad break (like in Hephaestus). Have you ever thought of writing a story that was about an established relationship that's starting to get dull? Normally, people have Harry/Ginny have the lackluster relationship, but it would be interesting to see how the boys would try and "save" theirs.
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Date: 2009-08-31 10:12 pm (UTC)A thought struck me in the middle of reading this. I think all of the H/D fics I have read cover the beginnings of a romance, or the beginnings of a second romance after a bad break (like in Hephaestus). Have you ever thought of writing a story that was about an established relationship that's starting to get dull? Normally, people have Harry/Ginny have the lackluster relationship, but it would be interesting to see how the boys would try and "save" theirs.