Wheeee! This makes up for other stories coming to an end ;) I already love the feel - hard-boiled film noir meets fantasy, and with Draco seemingly coveting Harry in some way. There were a lot of lines that I really liked, especially when Harry was channeling Dashiell Hammett. Off the top of my head, I remember:
delightful and unexpected perversions to be found with house-elves
That’s all you’re selling, Harry wanted to say. Illusions. One touch of daylight and you’re burn like the vampire you are.
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Date: 2009-08-27 09:15 pm (UTC)