Oh, but I think crying is a good sign! If you want a scene to move someone, I think you should be crying or laughing, too. So if you want the death scene to move someone, then five times of crying is good (unless, of course, the death scene is deliberately supposed to be pathetic or ridiculous).
Good luck with your writing. The standard for reviews is hard to get out of one's head, but worth it.
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Date: 2009-02-16 02:43 am (UTC)Good luck with your writing. The standard for reviews is hard to get out of one's head, but worth it.