There were a few images that I liked when I was reading through this piece: Sirius and Harry rolling around on the floor, Sirius transforming into his Animagus form and walking away with a wand in his mouth, Snape sneaking into Harry's lessons (in a rather Dementor-esque type of way) and Harry showing Neville his Patronus. :)
And I liked having to pause and read whenever Voldemort made his cameo appearances. It's quite fun actually. Although I do I wish that Ginny was around to talk to Harry.
It must have been difficult writing Dumbledore in this chapter and the whole issue of Harry being starved by the Dursleys. I had a lot of mixed thoughts while reading this, especially since I just suffered from food poisoning. It's one thing for Harry to justify his indifference. But Dumbledore? He can't do a thing about it? Not even in an underhanded sneaky way like he did numerous times before? Dumbledore's war mentality here is ridiculous.
Love your writing! You have me warm up to the H/D pairing each and every time.
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Date: 2009-02-11 04:31 am (UTC)And I liked having to pause and read whenever Voldemort made his cameo appearances. It's quite fun actually. Although I do I wish that Ginny was around to talk to Harry.
It must have been difficult writing Dumbledore in this chapter and the whole issue of Harry being starved by the Dursleys. I had a lot of mixed thoughts while reading this, especially since I just suffered from food poisoning. It's one thing for Harry to justify his indifference. But Dumbledore? He can't do a thing about it? Not even in an underhanded sneaky way like he did numerous times before? Dumbledore's war mentality here is ridiculous.
Love your writing! You have me warm up to the H/D pairing each and every time.