It is rather amusing to see how much Draco takes after his parents. I admired the way you developed Draco's and Lucius' characters and have them mature. Particularly with Lucius' since I have never read a fic in which he was strongly on Harry's side. The fact that you could make this setence "But, my son, he thought, as he watched Harry roll his eyes a moment later with ill-concealed disgust, I will teach you to recognize why giving your fame away would be disastrous yet" sound natural and convincing to the reader is a great feat. And I'm impressed with Draco just as much as I did in "A Reckless Frame of Mind" (which is beautiful btw).
I love these lines: Lying there in the bed, motionless though they were, Draco thought he could feel the motion of the planet beneath them, turning them towards the sunrise and the years that lay beyond that.
You did an amazing job! It certainly gives a new dimension to "Bloody but Unbowed". I'm impressed that you were able to add more to such a wonderful story aside from the fact that you publish your works so readily. Bravo!
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Date: 2009-01-28 03:19 am (UTC)I love these lines: Lying there in the bed, motionless though they were, Draco thought he could feel the motion of the planet beneath them, turning them towards the sunrise and the years that lay beyond that.
You did an amazing job! It certainly gives a new dimension to "Bloody but Unbowed". I'm impressed that you were able to add more to such a wonderful story aside from the fact that you publish your works so readily. Bravo!