That was really beautiful. I loved the image of the intaglio; when Draco first mentioned it, about something that is not there still contributing to the whole picture, I almost teared up.
I liked Harry's imperfection. He really was a coward, and he was hurting Draco, and I hated that, but to make his decision thirteen (?) years later (too late, one might say) then when he could, maybe should have, takes a lot more courage than making it at the beginning, when there wasn't much to loose yet. There wasn't much to loose this time either, yes, but in a way, there was more to lose than one might imagine. Ginny was very awesome, too. Not a lot women would have been so gracious of being divorced over a guy, though of course that's not exactly it, but not many would be willing or able to see that. I admire her, and her strength. She did everyone, her family, her children, Harry, and in the and Draco and Draco's family too, a good service. (I think I'm saying that wrong, but I hope you know what I mean.) I liked the children, too. James is really cute, and I think he'll grow into a fine gentleman (and Albus and Scorpius too, of course). And I really like Draco. It was very cute how he wanted Harry all the time, but when he was actualy able to get him, he shied away like a freezing man from the fire. Especially the smug way when he showed Harry his divorce papers at the end was cute; I really wanted to hug him then. (And Harry too! He was cute, too, in that moment. He really couldn't believe it, could he? I want to frame that moment to remember forever.)
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Date: 2008-12-28 12:58 am (UTC)I liked Harry's imperfection. He really was a coward, and he was hurting Draco, and I hated that, but to make his decision thirteen (?) years later (too late, one might say) then when he could, maybe should have, takes a lot more courage than making it at the beginning, when there wasn't much to loose yet. There wasn't much to loose this time either, yes, but in a way, there was more to lose than one might imagine.
Ginny was very awesome, too. Not a lot women would have been so gracious of being divorced over a guy, though of course that's not exactly it, but not many would be willing or able to see that. I admire her, and her strength. She did everyone, her family, her children, Harry, and in the and Draco and Draco's family too, a good service. (I think I'm saying that wrong, but I hope you know what I mean.)
I liked the children, too. James is really cute, and I think he'll grow into a fine gentleman (and Albus and Scorpius too, of course).
And I really like Draco. It was very cute how he wanted Harry all the time, but when he was actualy able to get him, he shied away like a freezing man from the fire. Especially the smug way when he showed Harry his divorce papers at the end was cute; I really wanted to hug him then. (And Harry too! He was cute, too, in that moment. He really couldn't believe it, could he? I want to frame that moment to remember forever.)