Date: 2008-11-17 03:39 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
I don't know if I'm seeing a happy ending for this one. I understand both points of view (though I can't quite appreciate Draco's), but, by this time, this men are both so unbelievable stubborn, I can't see either of them bending. Frankly, I don't want to see Harry bend.

One thing I hate in Harry Potter fanfic is when author's create magical solutions for everything- I love the idea that his scars can't be healed, that the magic is too deeply ingrained, too violent, to be healed. It makes me wonder, if they were living in a world without magic, with no hope of healing, where would that leave Draco?

I liked that you made Scorpius' intelligence due to magical influence, if only to give Draco a walking reminder of how one of his fantastic plans can backfire in an unexpected way.
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