the moment between harry and draco looking at the keller home was quite sweet and touching, and pushing him off the cliff was brilliant.
But then he crushed Harry with a ferocious embrace and leaned down to whisper hoarsely into his ear, “I don’t ever want anyone else to have you. I don’t want you to give that acceptance to anyone else.”
this was was so perfectly, impulsively draco. i dare not hope, but his feelings for harry do seem to be getting the better of him (or, rather, harry's feelings for him seem to be getting the better of him).... :)
the section from snape's pov was gorgeously written, though i'm a bit sad that harry hasn't risen in snape's esteem as i'd hoped. this was such a wonderful line:
(Lily. His life had been a temple of mourning for her, and always would be).
so lovely.
the results to the blood magic are very interesting indeed. i don't know what to think, but i'm definitely nervous!!!
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Date: 2008-09-30 02:00 am (UTC)the moment between harry and draco looking at the keller home was quite sweet and touching, and pushing him off the cliff was brilliant.
But then he crushed Harry with a ferocious embrace and leaned down to whisper hoarsely into his ear, “I don’t ever want anyone else to have you. I don’t want you to give that acceptance to anyone else.”
this was was so perfectly, impulsively draco. i dare not hope, but his feelings for harry do seem to be getting the better of him (or, rather, harry's feelings for him seem to be getting the better of him).... :)
the section from snape's pov was gorgeously written, though i'm a bit sad that harry hasn't risen in snape's esteem as i'd hoped. this was such a wonderful line:
(Lily. His life had been a temple of mourning for her, and always would be).
so lovely.
the results to the blood magic are very interesting indeed. i don't know what to think, but i'm definitely nervous!!!