Yet again you have prompted a terrible lurker like me to comment :)
I am so enjoying this story. I love you characterisation of Harry and Draco (and the other Malfoys as well in fact). The reasoning behind the characters actions are so well thought out. They are IC enough that I recognise them but evolved so that I still find them interesting - with the amount of fanfiction I've read, it can start to feel like I've seen it all before but one of your talents is keeping it fresh.
However, the best thing in this chapter? The shower! Where can I find the suppliers? I want one now. I actually felt my muscles unwind as you described his bathing experience - and a shower that exfoliates for you? Pure genius. Hope someone invents this soon (make sure you get your royalty fees when they do!).
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Date: 2008-07-21 12:32 am (UTC)I am so enjoying this story. I love you characterisation of Harry and Draco (and the other Malfoys as well in fact). The reasoning behind the characters actions are so well thought out. They are IC enough that I recognise them but evolved so that I still find them interesting - with the amount of fanfiction I've read, it can start to feel like I've seen it all before but one of your talents is keeping it fresh.
However, the best thing in this chapter? The shower! Where can I find the suppliers? I want one now. I actually felt my muscles unwind as you described his bathing experience - and a shower that exfoliates for you? Pure genius. Hope someone invents this soon (make sure you get your royalty fees when they do!).