I see what you're saying, yes. But this is 50 chapters and staying that way! No matter how much it wants to grow. :)
(Seriously, one of my big weaknesses- and I learned this the hard way- is that when I try to write very, very long stories, they inevitably turn into soap operas. It's better to end them while the plot is still somewhat coherent).
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Date: 2008-07-17 03:00 am (UTC)(Seriously, one of my big weaknesses- and I learned this the hard way- is that when I try to write very, very long stories, they inevitably turn into soap operas. It's better to end them while the plot is still somewhat coherent).