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lomonaaeren ([personal profile] lomonaaeren) wrote2009-11-19 08:29 pm
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You know what I would like?

For "Another Country" not to turn into a novella, the way it's threatening to do.

(Seriously. 8000 words and a lot of them are details about the Healers' treatment of Harry and Harry's resentment of this and Draco's library-spirit? Seriously? You were supposed to be on your way to establishing the relationship by now, story).

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-11-22 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Plots certainly do!

I think the pace of their interaction is about right. I suppose I just didn't anticipate so much interaction.