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lomonaaeren ([personal profile] lomonaaeren) wrote2009-03-17 11:41 am
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Progress Report 3/17

And I am back! Ta-da!



[livejournal.com profile] hd_worldcup fic: Finished and submitted!

Inter Vivos: This will be my priority for this week—as soon as I can sit down and get it decently worked on. I know what events should happen in the sixth year, but not their order. I also need to come up with a sufficiently dramatic ending for the year.





I was kind of looking forward to working on just one novel-length story and then whatever one-shots I wanted around that. But then two ideas for short novels—which have banged around in the back of my head for awhile, and seemed like one-shots—emerged last night fully-formed. It’s really tempting to start one of them, except a) I don’t know if I should and b) I can’t choose between them anyway.

Temperance would be my second Veela story. Draco is having odd flare-ups where his Veela features emerge with seemingly no set schedule—wings, beak, charm, etc.—and he loses control of himself and goes around using his powers to steal things. The Ministry sends Harry, as the only Auror immune to Veela charms, to capture him. Then the Ministry wants to send him to Azkaban, since he’s nearly made people rape others in fits of lust, but Harry points out that won’t work; he would just charm someone to let him out of his cell the moment the Veela features emerged again. Instead, Harry, who had a bad experience of his own three years ago that disordered his magic and had to deal with that, offers to shelter Draco in his house, keep him safe when the Veela traits show, and help him to control the magic. One option that would help Draco control it is to get him magically bound to another person, but in this universe Veela have no set mates, and Harry isn’t willing to just chain Draco to the highest bidder. He wants Draco to have freedom and choice—and control at the same time. That would be the main theme of the story, that tension between freedom and restraint, and is the reason for the title. And Harry has something to learn about it, too.

Providence is set in a world where Harry has three pieces of knowledge. He’s fallen for Draco after the way Draco has cleaned up his act since the war, but he knows/“knows” Draco is straight and won’t look twice at him. He also knows Draco is lonely, and needs a partner to be happy. And finally, he knows that Astoria Greengrass is in love with Draco, much the same way Ginny used to be in love with Harry, and would give him the adoration and support Harry thinks he deserves—if he could only persuade Draco to consider her as someone mature and clever rather than a bedazzled little girl. So the obvious solution, at least for Harry, is to write Draco letters as coming from a “secret admirer,” and pretend they’re from Astoria. (He lets Astoria into the secret, and she eagerly agrees, since she wants Draco so much). This does not, of course, help Harry’s own unrequited longing, but he cares much more for Draco’s happiness than his own. And he also doesn’t consider what will happen if Draco falls in love with the writer of the letters, who’s, well, not really Astoria. Providence is the title both for the meaning of divine good luck and as a play on the sense of “providing” for someone.



I will start replying to comments pretty soon, and I hope to be able to post something today. I’m still fairly tired from the trip, though, so I can’t promise anything. But it’s good to be back!

Welcome back...

[identity profile] in-praesenti.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
But it’s good to be back!
And it's good to have you back!

Life is just different without updates from you! ;P

I'm very much in love with Inter Vivos at the moment and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it. And the other two stories seem very interesting too...

I hope you had a good trip!

Re: Welcome back...

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! There will probably be a new chapter of IV tomorrow; at the moment, I'm working on one of my one-shots.

[identity profile] weasleywench.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
These sound really exciting. I'm very much looking forward to reading them. :D At a delay these days, but hey! Can't fault me for trying. :D

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And hey, no problem. I'm happy to receive comments at any time.
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[identity profile] sethra2000.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back, I hope the holiday was enjoyable and not to tiring.

Wow, those 2 ideas sound really intriguing, especially the Veela story. I have a fondness for well written veela stories and the theme and premise have the makings of a very emotional story, which is one of the things I enjoy most about your stories.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. The travel itself was stressful, but the holiday did turn out very nice.

And thank you. I decided to wait a bit on Temperance because I think it's very similar to Siege Mentality in its premise of Draco controlling his magic, and I didn't want the two stories to bleed into each other.

[identity profile] facecat.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back.

Is aurea mediocritas still an idea? It sounds very interesting also. Or is it done & I missed it somehow?

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

It is still an idea, but at the moment, I'm just not really in the mood to write it. We'll see how I feel later this year.

[identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
oo welcome back bebe!

i love the idea of both stories - the first one sounds intriguing and complex, and i think you could come up with some really nifty spells/magic in general. whereas the second one sounds like straight up fun! with a dash of angst, i'm hoping ;)

really looking fwd to both.

ps:- i am very behind on inter vivos as you might've realised from my lack of comments :(

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Heh, so far you are the only one who has seen Providence as the comedy I meant it to be! A lot of other people seem to think it'll be filled with heavy angst.

And don't worry about it! I know how RL gets.

[identity profile] vaysh11.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful to have you back. I started missing "Inter Vivos" :-D. Let me know whenever you start with Intoxicate the Sun and you still would like to try having me as a beta. No hurries, of course. I am just in awe by your output of stories and novels. And congrats on getting the hd_worldcup story in.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

I'll be starting Intoxicate the Sun after IV is finished, so look for an e-mail from me then! I know, I think, what the ending is now, and if you don't mind spoilers I'll also ask you for an opinion on that.

[identity profile] vaysh11.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm looking forward very much to Intoxicate the Sun. And of course I don't mind spoilers - it kind of comes with being a beta ;-). Do ask whenever you are ready.

Welcome back!

[identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay - you're back! Squee!

Providence sounds amazing, because, firstly, it'd be written by you, secondly, it sounds like an awesome romantic story and thirdly I have a serious weakness for H/D-(partly-)anonymously-exchanging-letters/notes/e-mails-stories! ♥ Pleeaase write it!

Temperance sounds really good, too - 'learning-to-control-magic'-fics are often fantastic.

I'll be looking forward to your post and stalking your journal as usual ^^

Re: Welcome back!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I hope Providence satisfies you. At the moment, it seems seriously interesting to me.

Re: Welcome back!

[identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
You're welcome! When I've finished my evil homework I will pounce on the first chapter like an energized chocolate frog!

[identity profile] lunasky3.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back!! I love all of your ideas, and very excited for these upcoming ones. The last one sounds a bit like a Cyrano de Bergerac themed story. (I love those) :)

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

A lot of people have said that now, but the influence was through other sources and unconscious, as I've never read Cyrano.

[identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
All sounds very interesting. The second plot reminds me Cyrano de Bergerac by Edmond Rostand. I also have a weak spot for veelas. I am looking forward to both stories!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] soriano76.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back!!! Lovely plots, can't wait for read them both particularly the first it's a lwhile from my last veela fic... I miss them a little.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

I do still look out for new veela fics, but a lot of them only get a chapter in or so before they're abandoned, so I'm not as interested as I used to be.

[identity profile] sorringmay.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
It is wonderful to have you back. Hope you had a good time, but we did miss you and your lovely stories.

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter of "Inter Vivos" and am now looking forward to reading "Temperance" and "Providence." I am also looking forward to “Said the Tortoise to the Hare,” This one has had my attention since I first read your summary of it.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I actually started "Said the Tortoise to the Hare" yesterday, though it'll be a while before it's posted.

(Anonymous) 2009-03-17 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad you're back! Missing Inter Vivos and I can't wait for an update. Both of these stories sound amazing as usual. I think I'm partial to Providence. Unrequited love, Harry pinning and being clueless, and trying to convince Draco to be with Astoria. Sigh. So excited! Thank you!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! These are some of the reasons I chose to work on Providence first.

[identity profile] ravenqueen55.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back! Hope you had a good trip.

OHHHH!!! I'm excited about both those stories, especially 'Temperance' (I've got a thing for good creature!fics).

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Temperance will be written, definitely, but not right away.

[identity profile] cassie-black12.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
So glad you're back - I've been pining for more of your fabulous writing.

I love both the ideas you mentioned. Mind you, you write so well that I'd probably love reading your shopping list!!

Can't wait for next chapter of 'Inter Vivos'

Hope you had good hols.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I did have a good trip, and I'll be putting the next chapter of IV up today.

[identity profile] ethelnorthbrook.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
yay! it's great to have you back! can't wait for the next chapter!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] leftye.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, I love both ideas, your fics are the best!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] agr8fae.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Welcome back! You just have so many ideas, it's a wonder you can think of anything else besides fic. I'm excited for either/both of these!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Sometimes, especially when I'm trying to sleep, I find it difficult to think of anything besides fic!

[identity profile] nimue-8.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I hope you had a wonderful trip!

All your stories look good, but today, I'm partial to Providence!
It seems entretaining and heartwarming!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

And yes, I think Providence will be good. It's a comedy, not a tragedy, despite the premise.

[identity profile] phangkyu.livejournal.com 2009-03-17 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
didn't take you long to decide, did it? :)

i wish i had your imagination, and i wish i had a tenth of your skill in opening it up for others.

good week off?

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
No. :) In this case, I think Temperance would be more angsty, and I need a break from the angst of IV sometimes. And it's also more like Siege Mentality, so I want to leave it alone and let the idea mature for a while.

Thanks!

And yes, it was. Stressful in the traveling part, but I got to have a lot of fun when I was there.

[identity profile] hogwartshoney.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
Welcome back, luv.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Your icon is adorable.

[identity profile] myfluffcanfly.livejournal.com 2009-03-18 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Had to remind myself every day that you were out of town and wouldn't be updating. Hopefully it was a good trip!

Loved the first chapter of Providence, and can't wait for more of Inter Vivos-- though Temperance also sounds amazing! I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but I love you for it.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2009-03-19 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I did!

The next chapter of IV should be posted today.