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lomonaaeren ([personal profile] lomonaaeren) wrote2008-06-18 10:12 am

Yet another novel-length story to ambush me

This one has no title, which makes it even more inconvenient. I suppose I can refer to it as "that clichéd thing" for a while, especially since it probably won't get written until after Secondhand Heroes, Written by the Losers, and Aurea Mediocritas.



This is Harry/Draco, and epilogue-compliant, though most of it takes place four years after the epilogue. Ginny finds out that someone's cast an entropic curse on her. The curse inflicts damage and eventually death on anyone in her family who she spends a lot of time around. She goes into St. Mungo's for as much treatment as the Healers can afford her, and then goes traveling. She and Harry- who's devastated- agree on a divorce; over the years they've achieved a companionate marriage rather than a passionate one, so this leaves them still as friends but free to pursue other sexual partners if they'd like. The Healers have been able to reassure Ginny that the curse wouldn't strike any second family she tried to raise, but was aimed directly at Harry and the Weasleys. They're also able to find out that it was cast five years ago, at the time when James first went to Hogwarts, and probably in King's Cross. The power driving it is malice against Harry. But given the number of people in King's Cross at any one time, there's no way to be sure who the culprit is from that scant evidence.

To say Harry is furious is an understatement. He throws himself into discovering who cursed Ginny, to the point that his job performance takes a dramatic nosedive. And that is a bad, bad thing when there's a murderer on the loose, a murderer who kidnaps children and then returns them piece by piece. The case is an absolute PR disaster for the Aurors, with a child taken every full moon and killed by every dark, seven times so far. Karen Whitcomb, the harassed Head of the Auror Department, does something she thinks will redirect Harry's attention to the case in front of him until it's solved: she orders a telepathic bond spell performed between him and Draco. Draco is also an Auror, very good at the parts of his job that can be performed individually, but so arrogant and prickly his partners won't stay with him for long. The bond spell, Whitcomb hopes, will not only distract Harry but center and ground Draco by giving him a partner who can't help but understand him.

Harry and Draco, of course, protest. Whitcomb overrules them. Draco wants to keep his job to maintain a good reputation for the Malfoys, and Harry needs the resources of the Aurors to hunt down his enemy, so they can't just quit. They find themselves sharing thoughts and emotions involuntarily until they learn to establish barriers. Then it's dreams. Then they know each other's general state of being- where the other man is and if he's hurt, for example. And then things start getting really weird. Whitcomb, in her desperation, neglected to read the fine print on the telepathic bond spell- including whether it can be reversed.

If it were only the central bond idea, this story wouldn't need to be novel-length- and that was the idea that first came to me. But I crossbred it with other ideas, as I like to do, and now there's a lot of bustle going on: the kidnapping case, the search for the person who cursed Ginny, Harry and Draco struggling to come to grips with their bond, Auror politics and PR (Whitcomb is probably going to be a viewpoint character, if only to show how the Auror Department's public reputation is decaying as they fail to find that kidnapper), Draco's tumultuous family life (he's also divorced, but that doesn't prevent problems with Astoria and Scorpius), Harry's relationships with his children and the other Weasleys (some of whom approve his search for the enemy who cursed Ginny, others of whom think Harry is entirely too obsessed), and Ginny's letters from abroad as she travels and finds love.

Finding a title that suits this whole thing is going to be a challenge. And I am distressed bewildered by how much seems to happen in the stories I come up with lately.

[identity profile] grey-hunter.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 03:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, JKR said that there was some ultimate character test that doesn't let people with character flaws become Aurors how the hell did Ron pass that? Or Harry, for that matter. *cough*Imperio*cough*Crucio. But I think that's more about leanings towards Dark Arts or having loose morals, being accepting of bribes. I don't know how she'd imagined that an Auror's characteristics wouldn't change over time, but at least they start out squeaky clean. I believe all the Aurors who worked for Voldemort were in some way coerced, confounded or under Imperius. And I have a feeling that they adhere more to the law and written rules than to their sense of justice if the two happen to clash. But I don't think the Head Auror would turn out to be a Dark Wizard, that's something I'd consider extremely out of the universe. Not that yours runs the danger of becoming one. :P I just remember reading someone's reaction who adheres to canon rather strictly that this would mean that Draco wouldn't stand a chance of becoming an Auror. *shrugs* My Draco would totally find a way to if he wanted to. :D

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I hadn't heard that bit about character tests. Come on. It's hard to see what they would even test. Honesty? Reluctance to harm others? I could envision situations where you'd have to lie or hurt people as part of the job. (But then, I picture Aurors as more like wizarding cops).

And I have a feeling that they adhere more to the law and written rules than to their sense of justice if the two happen to clash.

Yep. And you can get some interesting characters that way- even people who would use Dark Arts if they thought it was necessary, or less evil than doing something else. (There were, after all, those Aurors who had power under Crouch Sr. to use the Unforgivable Curses; I can't imagine there'd be much point to granting the permission if they thought it was impossible for Aurors to use the curses).

And yeah, I think Draco can become an Auror if he really wants to. I'd imagine other obstacles, like his name, would cause more a problem than passing the Auror tests.

[identity profile] grey-hunter.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I picture Aurors as more like wizarding cops

I think those are the Hit Wizards. Aurors are more like head hunters - only go after Dark Wizards while Hit Wizards go after the normal criminals. Or at least the lexicon says so (http://www.hp-lexicon.org/ministry/auror.html):

The Aurors are an elite group of witches and wizards who battle the Dark Arts. They operate in some ways as soldiers but more often as intelligence agents, seeking out Dark wizards and defeating them, often in fierce wizard duels. Alastor Moody and Frank and Alice Longbottom were famous Aurors. Aurors are sometimes refered to as Dark Wizard catchers.
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The Department of Magical Law Enforcement maintains squads of trained Hit Wizards whose job it is to capture dangerous wizarding criminals. A group of these Hit Wizards captured Sirius Black after he supposedly killed Peter Pettigrew. The Hit Wizards are not the same as Aurors. Hit Wizards, it would seem, are sent primarily against criminals while Aurors track down and capture Dark Wizards.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
And see, I pictured them the exact opposite way around, just because "Hit Wizards" sounds like "hit men" to me- someone whose primary job is to strike hard and fast and in very specific places. Also, I think it's odd that Sirius wouldn't be considered a Dark wizard when he supposedly killed thirteen people with a single curse. But then, it's never very clear what the definition of Dark magic is in canon, either, beyond the Unforgivables.

[identity profile] grey-hunter.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
In that light, Harry should be a Dark wizard, since he had used Unforgivables.