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lomonaaeren ([personal profile] lomonaaeren) wrote2008-06-18 10:12 am

Yet another novel-length story to ambush me

This one has no title, which makes it even more inconvenient. I suppose I can refer to it as "that clichéd thing" for a while, especially since it probably won't get written until after Secondhand Heroes, Written by the Losers, and Aurea Mediocritas.



This is Harry/Draco, and epilogue-compliant, though most of it takes place four years after the epilogue. Ginny finds out that someone's cast an entropic curse on her. The curse inflicts damage and eventually death on anyone in her family who she spends a lot of time around. She goes into St. Mungo's for as much treatment as the Healers can afford her, and then goes traveling. She and Harry- who's devastated- agree on a divorce; over the years they've achieved a companionate marriage rather than a passionate one, so this leaves them still as friends but free to pursue other sexual partners if they'd like. The Healers have been able to reassure Ginny that the curse wouldn't strike any second family she tried to raise, but was aimed directly at Harry and the Weasleys. They're also able to find out that it was cast five years ago, at the time when James first went to Hogwarts, and probably in King's Cross. The power driving it is malice against Harry. But given the number of people in King's Cross at any one time, there's no way to be sure who the culprit is from that scant evidence.

To say Harry is furious is an understatement. He throws himself into discovering who cursed Ginny, to the point that his job performance takes a dramatic nosedive. And that is a bad, bad thing when there's a murderer on the loose, a murderer who kidnaps children and then returns them piece by piece. The case is an absolute PR disaster for the Aurors, with a child taken every full moon and killed by every dark, seven times so far. Karen Whitcomb, the harassed Head of the Auror Department, does something she thinks will redirect Harry's attention to the case in front of him until it's solved: she orders a telepathic bond spell performed between him and Draco. Draco is also an Auror, very good at the parts of his job that can be performed individually, but so arrogant and prickly his partners won't stay with him for long. The bond spell, Whitcomb hopes, will not only distract Harry but center and ground Draco by giving him a partner who can't help but understand him.

Harry and Draco, of course, protest. Whitcomb overrules them. Draco wants to keep his job to maintain a good reputation for the Malfoys, and Harry needs the resources of the Aurors to hunt down his enemy, so they can't just quit. They find themselves sharing thoughts and emotions involuntarily until they learn to establish barriers. Then it's dreams. Then they know each other's general state of being- where the other man is and if he's hurt, for example. And then things start getting really weird. Whitcomb, in her desperation, neglected to read the fine print on the telepathic bond spell- including whether it can be reversed.

If it were only the central bond idea, this story wouldn't need to be novel-length- and that was the idea that first came to me. But I crossbred it with other ideas, as I like to do, and now there's a lot of bustle going on: the kidnapping case, the search for the person who cursed Ginny, Harry and Draco struggling to come to grips with their bond, Auror politics and PR (Whitcomb is probably going to be a viewpoint character, if only to show how the Auror Department's public reputation is decaying as they fail to find that kidnapper), Draco's tumultuous family life (he's also divorced, but that doesn't prevent problems with Astoria and Scorpius), Harry's relationships with his children and the other Weasleys (some of whom approve his search for the enemy who cursed Ginny, others of whom think Harry is entirely too obsessed), and Ginny's letters from abroad as she travels and finds love.

Finding a title that suits this whole thing is going to be a challenge. And I am distressed bewildered by how much seems to happen in the stories I come up with lately.

[identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Sounds like a cool story!

[identity profile] carollinali.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. I'm super curious now.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
So am I. I haven't really written a story with multiple mystery plots going at once (there's one with an intrigue plot and then a mystery centered on Harry and Draco's relationship, but not multiple criminals). I have a good candidate for the person who cursed Ginny, but haven't decided on the kidnapper's identity yet.

[identity profile] melonbutterfly.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm definetely looking forward to read that :)
Is that one of those stories where you want to display Ginny as a human being? (you said that somewhere once, among other of the many things you want to write.)

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

And oh, yes. In this case, what with the cause for her separation from Harry not her fault and her being off-stage but writing letters to Harry and her family, I think it would be very easy to portray her as sympathetic.

[identity profile] star-faerie.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 06:22 pm (UTC)(link)
An interesting concept, though it sounds like a VERY complicated plot.

I'm sure the title will come to you. Eventually. :)

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. And it does, which is one reason I had to upgrade it in my mind from medium-length to novel-length.

I thought of a potential title earlier today, but it doesn't make enough sense for the whole story, and I refuse to name a story after a Sonata Arctica song, no matter how much I like it.

[identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
You are very prolific. Do you think about writing as a career choice or is it just a hobby? You can probably publish books.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I would love to be a writer, but that's as often a matter of chance and luck as anything else. It's the sort of thing I can see myself trying but not making a living at (only about 5% of writers in the US make a living from their work). Also, I don't think my writing is good enough for publication yet.

[identity profile] shaneey.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I can promise you that 100% of your readers disagree with that statement. :)
You're writing style is definitely better than a large number of the published authors I've had the misfortune to read.
Your writing could definitely rank up there with that 5%!

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much. But while I think that there's some aspects of writing that I'm very good at (characterization psychology and plot, for example) there's other aspects which are important but which I haven't improved on in a while and don't really understand how to improve on (the prettiness of my prose and how to revise). So I think I'd have to work on those before I could publish.

[identity profile] kansaslynn.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE bond stories. LOVE THEM. And I just know you're going to be extrodinary at the telepathic thoughts and emotions that will spill into Harry and Draco as the bond takes hold. I cannot WAIT for you to begin this. Is there a waiting list for your fabulous inspiriations? If so, this one should get pushed to the top. Violently. ;)

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 07:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Bonds are one of those concepts I like in theory, but a lot of the stories I've read using it go too fast or ignore certain consequences of the bond- like what it would really be like to hear every thought, if that's what it's being portrayed as, instead of only the profound or arousing ones. I have written one story before that used a bond as a small part of the plot, and had fun.

And there is a waiting list! Maybe this one could be 3 instead of 5, though. :)

[identity profile] hpstrangelove.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm looking forward to this one. Actually, I look forward to everything you write, but this one has some of my favorite HP/DM characteristics. I always love either, or both, of them as Aurors, and it's nice to not have Ginny be a bitch for a change. The bond is another characteristic I like, and the back story sounds intriguing.

Titles are a funny thing - sometimes they seem to just jump out of the fic, and other times it takes forever to come up with the right one. Good luck. Don't keep us waiting too long! (What's the most WIPs you've had going at one time?)

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I really have tried to write Ginny as less of a bitch lately, but here it'll be easier than usual, since she's a victim of the spell that forces her and Harry apart, too.

I wanted to set the bond from the beginning against a background that would deepen it and give it something else than just the romantic relationship to work on; I just didn't expect it to be this busy.

I'm hoping I may have a suitable title soon. Maybe a line of poetry will do the trick, as it has for several others.

The most I've had going is three- that was back in March, when I was writing two novel-length stories and a shorter story, eight chapters, at the same time.

[identity profile] ravenqueen55.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Sounds fabulous! You keep writing; I'll keep reading.

[identity profile] nimue-8.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm hooked! :-) The plot is captivating and the characterisation of Harry, Draco, Ginny and the others seems three-dimensionnal and fun.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! At the moment, I seem to have enough ideas to keep me occupied for another year at least.

[identity profile] lomonaaeren.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

The characterizations are what would make the story for me. Harry is strongest in my mind at the moment, but Draco, Whitcomb, and Ginny will get their chances.

[identity profile] ravenqueen55.livejournal.com 2008-06-18 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, that's good news for me and the rest of the H/D fans. You write quality fics, and no matter what the plotline I ALWAYS enjoy them.

[identity profile] eavling.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
I really don't think you're at fault that you can't write a one-dimensional story...I mean, think of all the unfortunates out there who can do nothing but!

I'm lookin forward to this story!

[identity profile] kelahnus-24.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
Sound like a really good plot idea. I like how your stories never go the way we expect them to. Can't wait to read it ^^

Without Recourse

[identity profile] inviticus1.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
My only regret is that I'm not a publishing magnate with the ability to put you under long-term contract and commit you to writing for me (I mean us, of course) for the indefinite future. I think the premise is quite a unique take on the post-epilogue world and I welcome the opportunity to once again explore your prose, particularly the impact on the kids and the evolution of the bond!

[identity profile] ms-mindfunk.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
Do these just spring fully formed into your head, or what? It's amazing how you continue to bring forth such intricate plots without ever "running dry", so to speak. How do you get inspired?

I do well once I have an initial idea and start rolling, but coming up with that start is agonizing. I think the mental (and physical, to be honest) exhaustion saps my creativity. Do you have a life that's conducive to thinking and writing, or are you just as crunched as the rest of us?

If you don't feel like having your brain picked, feel free to say piss off. :) I know the process can be personal for some folks. I'm just fascinated with how you manage to keep going constantly, particularly with the high quality of your writing.

Gawd, I sound like such a suckup. :P

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