Sexually "hot" is so subjective. It's one reason I worry about the fest prompts that are heavy on kink and light on plot. Of course the recipient is probably still going to say she liked it, it's the polite thing to do, but I'm a lot more worried about my ability to actually arouse someone, especially with kinks I don't share, than I am worried about my ability to engage them with a plot.

Unfortunately, at this point I don't think I'll be going back to that story. I'm working on other original stuff that has my full attention, and that story was abandoned...about a year and a half ago now, I think. I find I violently hate everything I wrote from about six months back and can't reread it.