ext_185698 ([identity profile] alexis-sd.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-06-04 03:10 pm (UTC)

Sorry for deleting my post. I just wanted to correct some mistakes, the post is right under this one.

I understand you on point 1) that's why I said it. The IC is something everyone feels for themselves, but throughout a story a character can change only if the story puts him through an obstacle or something of for some other good reason, not for the sake of it.

3) Yes, new powers that spring out of nowhere in some point and then the reader scratches their head thinking 'Why now? He could've done it tow chapters ago...' Or when e smart character suddenly loses 30 points from his IQ or the opposite a stupid one start to act as if he is a genius.

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