ext_80402 ([identity profile] agr8fae.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lomonaaeren 2008-06-02 02:25 am (UTC)

Well! That was quite a dramatic chapter! I love how much Hermione has grown now, and really dislike Narcissa, now!
I did notice a typo, though. Is she so different now just because Draco is in danger from me, and not Voldemort? Or did something else happen in the last few years to convince her that she’ll never that desperate again? Shouldn't that be "she'll never be that desperate again"?

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