I'm about to leave for school, so no long comments today.
Hermione is awesome! I really like to see how she changed from the beginning of the story, weak and useless, consumed by grief, into what she's become now, strong (! very much so) and independent and just totally awesome.
She really knows how to intimidate people, doesn't she? Even Draco and Milicent admire her (even though they won't admit it aloud).
Huh, I've never disliked Narcissa this much. She's often not really involved in most stories, or when she is she is just kind of passive. But this, it's not really unexpected, but I never really thought that she would take action like that! But isn't it a bit stupid to do what she's done to get into Harry's cell? Her words imply that she's used something worse than Imperius. Can't mean anything good if she gets caught.
Harry's awesome too! I don't think Narcissa has ever got a 'f*ck you' thrown in her face before! Ever! In any fanfic. At least not that I know of. It was a bit stupid really, but she really deserved it. She deserves more, much much more, but I guess it's the best Harry can do given the circumstances!
You use Latin for your spells, right? I tried a translator for the spell Narcissa used, but I got 5 different definitions. I still don't know what she's done. Damn.
Thanks for the great chapter, can't wait for the next!
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Hermione is awesome! I really like to see how she changed from the beginning of the story, weak and useless, consumed by grief, into what she's become now, strong (! very much so) and independent and just totally awesome.
She really knows how to intimidate people, doesn't she? Even Draco and Milicent admire her (even though they won't admit it aloud).
Huh, I've never disliked Narcissa this much. She's often not really involved in most stories, or when she is she is just kind of passive. But this, it's not really unexpected, but I never really thought that she would take action like that! But isn't it a bit stupid to do what she's done to get into Harry's cell? Her words imply that she's used something worse than Imperius. Can't mean anything good if she gets caught.
Harry's awesome too! I don't think Narcissa has ever got a 'f*ck you' thrown in her face before! Ever! In any fanfic. At least not that I know of. It was a bit stupid really, but she really deserved it. She deserves more, much much more, but I guess it's the best Harry can do given the circumstances!
You use Latin for your spells, right? I tried a translator for the spell Narcissa used, but I got 5 different definitions. I still don't know what she's done. Damn.
Thanks for the great chapter, can't wait for the next!