this story is so genius and it just keeps getting better!!!!!!
i loved harry getting jealous over draco and blaise before he reined himself in. and you described the almost nostalgic familiarity between the two so beautifully.
the second half of this chapter felt like such a huge breakthrough between harry and draco. i loved how genuinely confused harry was as to why draco wouldn't want him sleeping with others.
and yeah for the reappearance of the voice at the end! i'm quite intrigued by the connections the voice was making between harry and itself. if i remember correctly, you said in response to one of my earlier comments that the voice is more than a conscience, but not exactly a new persona. i'm very curious...
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i loved harry getting jealous over draco and blaise before he reined himself in. and you described the almost nostalgic familiarity between the two so beautifully.
the second half of this chapter felt like such a huge breakthrough between harry and draco. i loved how genuinely confused harry was as to why draco wouldn't want him sleeping with others.
and yeah for the reappearance of the voice at the end! i'm quite intrigued by the connections the voice was making between harry and itself. if i remember correctly, you said in response to one of my earlier comments that the voice is more than a conscience, but not exactly a new persona. i'm very curious...
can't wait for more!