Its so refreshing to read your work. This was absolutely brilliant. I have a huge soft spot for Jealous!Harry and this portrayal was brilliant. I laughed out loud almost all the way through it. From Harry's increasingly stupid reasons for interrupting to Ian's obvious ineptitude to Draco's rising opinion of himself - based on his ability to not huff and scream. This Harry and Draco have a wonderful dynamic. I thoroughly enjoyed every line.
Bravo! Bravo! Bravo.