Thank you. I'm pleased with your wording; I did want to show passion as ugly, though no one in the fic uses that word.

I don't usually concentrate too much on how Harry's children are affected by his infidelity, or else I make their reactions positive, so it was nice to be able to dip into their perspectives here. And I think they came powerfully to live.

I suppose that there was an element of uncertainty behind Draco's action in coming to Harry, but I think he was probably too confident to really believe Harry would reject him. :)