Totally amazing! I didn't see that twist coming. I always admire how your characters are intelligent. It's fun, too, that Narcissa discovered Harry but not when we feared (the time he brought attention to his scar). You didn't made her attack then, no, you let us relax, regain confidence and then :BAM! the mild-manered, well-behaved, misty-eyed, vulnerable Mrs Malfoy gets the powerful Harry Potter with his back to the wall!
I really have no idea what he will do. He can't betray Draco to his mother and he can't betray himself to Draco. Brilliant!
I also have no idea regarding how Draco will react when he discovers who Brian really is. This Draco is more mature but still very competitive, proud and domineering. Yet, it could be a relief to see that it is true that Brian/Harry really has no ambtions, seeks no glory and isn't here to destroy him on someone else's behalf.
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I always admire how your characters are intelligent. It's fun, too, that Narcissa discovered Harry but not when we feared (the time he brought attention to his scar). You didn't made her attack then, no, you let us relax, regain confidence and then :BAM! the mild-manered, well-behaved, misty-eyed, vulnerable Mrs Malfoy gets the powerful Harry Potter with his back to the wall!
I really have no idea what he will do. He can't betray Draco to his mother and he can't betray himself to Draco. Brilliant!
I also have no idea regarding how Draco will react when he discovers who Brian really is. This Draco is more mature but still very competitive, proud and domineering. Yet, it could be a relief to see that it is true that Brian/Harry really has no ambtions, seeks no glory and isn't here to destroy him on someone else's behalf.